When James ( Our Cyber smart teacher ) came in on Monday we learnt how to improve other peoples blog comments. I chose a comment from a post with lots of pictures of the class painting jungle animals. The original comment is at the top, and the big box at the bottom has my improved comment in it. The three boxes in the middle are a rubric, they have things in them that we needed to do to improve the post. In this activity I learnt that leaving a detailed blog comment is helpful to the learner, and keeps a conversation going. I hope you like the work, feel free to comment!
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