First post of 2017:-)

Hi blogging world. Welcome back! Its 2017 now and I have loads of new work to share with you.  Here is some stuff I have been doing this week. It is some writing called Cameron Pools!

Walt: write a recount.

A couple of days ago I started and finished a recount about going to super fun swimming lessons at Cameron Pools. We went to learn about water safety. The word 'recount' below is the link to my writing

recount

We were asked to add interesting language features like personification. Personification is a feature where you make an inanimate object like a human being. We also had to use: onomatopoeia and a great hook sentence.

Thank you for taking a look at my work. I hope you are having a great start to 2017. Please feel free to leave a comment.