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Monday, May 22, 2017

skateboarding fun!!!


Welcome back blogging world!
a couple of days ago in class we were told to write in any style about our first skateboarding class. I wrote and acrostic poem made up of the words 'skateboarding fun.'

Starting  on the gear,

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Knee pads
And elbow pads next,
Then  wristbands last.
IMG_1292.jpgExcellent!  Skateboarding time,
Blue, pink, orange boards.
Okay, let's go, position your foot!
And now let's push along the court.
Reaching the finishing line,  we  are
Done. Gear  away
IMG_1324.jpgInto the boxes.
Now, boards in formation.
Gosh, that went fast


Filled with pride, I went to class,
Unfortunately the lesson is over...
Now, I can’t wait to go back!

The thing that I found most easy while writing this poem was the letter 'S' at the beginning. The 'S' was easy because the word 'start' begins with 'S' and 'S' is also the first letter of 'skateboarding'. The bit I found most tricky was doing the letter 'U' because not many 'U' words relate to skateboarding.

I hope you like my work, and feel free to comment!
you could talk about shortening sentences into phrases and loosing the little words or the words that tell us something versus suggesting something. Poetry is like song lyrics and need to flow like miusic in a way




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